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November / Untitled

Time to write,
Wake up head!
Wordpress screen.
Brain is dead!

Turkey time,
Four more days!
Too much food.
Weight will raise!

Neighbor’s loud.
That’s not nice!
Knock on door,
Stab him twice!

Christmas coming.
Give me pause!
Evil being,
Santa Claus!

Scalding choc’late,
In my mug!
Pup comes home,
Stains on rug!

English major,
College bliss!
A hundred grand,
For crap like this!

Dan’s idea to write in verse!
Please don’t leave! Could be worse!

19 Responses to “November / Untitled”

  1. Robert
    November 18th, 2007 | 10:45 pm

    Marry me.

    :)

  2. November 18th, 2007 | 11:04 pm

    Reading this makes me feel like someone’s tickling my heart with a feather!

  3. November 18th, 2007 | 11:07 pm

    =) I was stuck trying to think about what to write, too.

  4. November 18th, 2007 | 11:26 pm

    Knock on door,
    Stab him twice!

    Out-fucking-standing. I love it.

  5. November 18th, 2007 | 11:46 pm

    you woke up in verse? impressive, I woke up stupid and groggy.

  6. Sam
    November 19th, 2007 | 12:40 am

    wow, that’s good! i can’t wait for turkey day.

  7. November 19th, 2007 | 5:12 am

    Ah glad you have sorted out the neighbour at last!! I guess that probably counts as exercise of sorts – a couple of vigorous stabs must raise the heart rate and then you could always have done some step aerobics on his guitar!!
    Coming here always makes me smile!!!
    Gina x

  8. November 19th, 2007 | 7:27 am

    Love it. Stab him twice line, pure genius. :)

  9. November 19th, 2007 | 1:36 pm

    i you love

  10. amy
    November 19th, 2007 | 2:26 pm

    Friggin’ adorable. You’re so cute.

  11. November 19th, 2007 | 4:42 pm

    This was seriously HILARIOUS!!!!!

    Love IT!

  12. November 19th, 2007 | 5:01 pm

    Possibly my favorite blog post of all time.

  13. November 19th, 2007 | 6:16 pm

    Love it! One of those feel good blogs… ;)

  14. rye
    November 19th, 2007 | 6:37 pm

    I’m with Christina – those lines are sheer genius!

  15. November 19th, 2007 | 8:20 pm

    Rachel, you’re so great.

  16. November 19th, 2007 | 9:09 pm

    creative! i love it.

  17. Dan
    November 19th, 2007 | 9:29 pm

    holla

  18. Woy
    November 19th, 2007 | 9:30 pm

    If only I could write nice poetry like this…

  19. November 20th, 2007 | 4:06 am

    This is good stuff.

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